A lonely old fellow called Bart,
Had never felt love in his heart,
Then he met Jenny Brown,
Who made him smile not frown,
Now they are never apart!
Author notes
A limerick about love!
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A contest entry
- Give me limericks! by Xox ILY xoX.
950 points, ended February 2, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Limericks ... by ecrivain01.
450 points, ended May 12, 36 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Not bad ...
but there's no zing there. Limericks are supposed to be humorous. This is nice, but not funny.
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That's so sweet. <3 I think it was a very cute touch to the world of limericks and it tickled me pink. The true short story of love - when you find the right one and your frown is turned upside down, things are just grand. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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So cute...Lovely limerick.
All the best!
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hehehe
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