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A Kiss

Missing image

 

 

 

 

I

blow you a

 

KISS

 

it comes from my

 

HEART

 

to you

 

my

 

PRECIOUS

 

ONE

 

 

 

 

 

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  • EverxEnding silver member
    January 28, 2008
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    Very nice take on the picture.
    I love how you took it to the romance side
    Good luck!


  • moonbumps silver member
    January 28, 2008
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    Unusually interesting...says it all really. xxx


  • arafura gold member
    January 28, 2008

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    I like the form and the simplicity too. Sometimes less is more and that's what strikes me about this one. Well done! Good luck in the contest!

  • Matt.
    January 28, 2008
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    Simple beauty

    I love the simplicity of this very short poem, and the layout and capitalisation.