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Day dreaming



When worry cages me
I return to my freedom,
a dream state
that skims over all else.
Ahh! the serene trance
where reality is forgotten
and nothing is remembered.
Like dancing under water
or lost in lovers kiss,
I soak up peaceful delight.


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  • Candyknife gold member
    January 29, 2008
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    dreams truly are wonderful ,
    i think this had a lot more potential for imagery though ,