Snuggled close to myself
I feel warm hands wrap around me
I wonder whats going on
Why is this happening
I feelthe motion pause
I feebly open my eyes
To see her stood
Holding me in her arms
Safe and secure
I huddle closer to the girl
Taking her warmth in
Feeling her love
I fall soundly asleep
Against her chest
Feeling at home
Author notes
I have 3 dogs meself all with the job of guarding. If you want to ask anything message me.
A contest entry
- PhantomsAngel87's -Animal Love- Picture Inspired by Manda Kathryn.
525 points, ended February 2, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - for the love of dogs. by jossiemarie.
300 points, ended July 10, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what ya think?
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that's a lovely poem
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Congratulations
To me each poem you write is gold material. This poem is very beautiful and you did a wonderful job wit this. Congratulations on winning the gold as stated before all of yours deserves that because your heart is made of gold and is pure and that is what I knew of you first and struck up the friendship with you in which I did and am thankful each and every day that I've got you as a friend. God bless you always. Know when you need me I'll do all I can to be there for you.
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Congrats on the gold!!!Well done and it is so full of love and warmth.You done an amazing job.
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Congrats on the gold!!
Very well deserved, a beautiful piece Congrats!!
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good
it's beautiful and it has emotion. i can see you angle and everything.it caught a heart string.(sorry im not good at commenting)
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Aww this is beautiful, you have really captured the moment here hunni. Best of luck in the contest with it, very well penned.
Mum xx
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