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Depressing Joy

I want to make it last.
This loneliness I feel,
Hurts more than anything.
Even though I'm in agony,
I've never felt so complete.

This unwanted chain,
Hangs around my neck.
I'm being pulled back,
And I've never felt better!
I'm insane for wanting it,
But it's so tempting.

I'm finally alive,
With this heart break.
I miss you so much,
But I never want to see you again.
This confusing melody in my head,
Has never sounded this sweet.

I want to collapse,
From this pain;
Instead I'm dancing,
In sheer confusion.
I'm turning insane,
But I don't care!

Well I think it's bad, what do you think?

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  • Swintha
    February 3, 2008

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    This is quite the poem ashlie and i did quite enjoy the last verse the most. your poetry is so amazing and i feel like you're on a roll. keep writting my furry friend!

    -Swintha


  • willcrook
    January 28, 2008
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    Clever

    Pointing the finger at a clever truth x