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Looking back at me.

When our eyes meet, silence fills the air
We sit there and for what seems to be a brief moment,we just stare
With eye contact we know what's on each others minds
You then begin to kiss me and our lips we tenderly find
Taking my breath away with each subtle touch
Everytime you kiss me like that I want you so much!
I feel the power of your love
The yearning from your body as I look at you from above
With just your kiss you light a fire down within
Making me desire your kisses again and again
I crave your touch,and the way it makes me feel

unfinished...





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  • Lamia
    January 28, 2008

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    I love how you ended it. It leaves the reader wanting more just like the author. I also really like your rhyming with this one. It flowed really well and your word choice was impeccable. Very well written. I think I shall bookmark this one