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My Suicide

I'm sick of this lyfe,

I'm tired of the pain.

I'm sick of you,

And I'm tired of your games.

 

I can't take it anymore,

My heart keeps aching.

I'm slowly dying on the inside,

With every breath I'm taking.

 

I see it glisten,

There lies the kinfe.

I'm going to do this,

I'm gonna take my own lyfe.

 

No one really cares,

They all think I'm just talk.

But its finally on my last nerve,

And on my grave I will knock.

 

I know I'll go to hell,

But its probably so much better.

Than being stuck in this world,

Where you will find this letter.

 

So here we go,

Nows the time.

You should find this on my bed,

So you will read my last: Good-Bye!

Author notes

I wrote this for Caleb when I was having such a hard time accepting myself for me. Also, when he was messing with me and I just almost gave up.

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  • shypoet89
    April 15
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    wow i loved this poem.... i can relate to it very much..... you did an awesome job..... i think that is what every suicidal person feels that way at some point i know i feel that way right now..... if you could please tell me what you think about my poem its called with everyday that passes that would be great thanks

  • e3m-l3ave
    November 30, 2008
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    awsome but dont let a guy let u down ur awsome in ur way :]


  • Tishyy Sixx
    January 29, 2008
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    i love it


  • sonata
    January 29, 2008
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    don't let boys ruin ur lyfe that way. there not worth it.


  • MiSs ImPeRfEcTiOn
    January 28, 2008
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    i love it


  • Xo.Xo.SHADY.Xo.Xo.
    January 28, 2008
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    Sweet..

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