i walked
on stones
barefoot
freezing
in the
rain
last
night
smoothly wet
soily crafted
as it poured
a new
darkness
for
sentiments
and
things
to list
and
remember
i didn't
know
what crept for me
in such
unusualness
and wilder
only that
it was
always
there
and why
i had
waited
so long
Author notes
"sometimes a new setting can lead us out of whatever maybe surrounds our thoughts and hearts, memories and tears." ~pithyAplomb.
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Comments
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like the different style
good luck
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When I was reading this, I was thinking "this could use a bit more metaphor but still resting toward the literal sense". That's exactly what came to mind. I think it would work better that way.
A nice poem that you have written here.
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I absolutely loved this! It gives great imagery and is well done. Thanks for sharing it.
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A stunning poem...full of wonder and awe. A very well crafted piece of work from a wonderful soul
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Thankyou Stephanie,
I'm glad you liked it!
! Just what it takes sometimes, different scenery ...to set the lingering mind straight! Little walks into the unordinary.
I'll stop by tonight to visit and read your thoughts!
God Bless,
~~pithyAplomb.
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I love this..why is it we wait to do the things that are right there in front of us? beautiful imagery and mood..
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Very deep... It deserves to be read a few times before commenting as there are a great many hidden nuances that it is a pleasure to find! Good luck in the contest!
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