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walk on

walk on
stand strong
push forward
don't give in
cuts and scraps from battle sting
an army of myself beat me down
slowly dying inside is stand again
soulless eyes stare blankly
fight the fears to make you alone
you left me behind and i think of you
my fear is having none
so my love is what i fear
because you not here

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  • Tazmanian Poet
    February 29, 2008
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    love this;]


  • StarLightResurrects
    February 20, 2008
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    i love the line "my love is what i fear" it makes me think of being afraid to love something or someone, and you end up loving them more anyway.


  • Veneer of Vanity
    January 29, 2008
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    i like the emotion of this poem. to me it stands out strongly