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Stone Words

Pretending that the words don't mean a thing
Turn my head away
It doesn't hurt

Lie to myself
As these feelings disappear
It doesn't hurt

Author notes

More lost minded self expression. That kind of thought and feeling only known by those whom experience it. Jaded emotions poured over the fire. Watch as they burn away. Remembrance of forgotten words that don't mean a thing.

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  • bones7
    March 17, 2008
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    I like this great job,Repitition of last line added impact,Great job.


  • im only half empty
    January 28, 2008
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    wow...

    This is an all to familiaur feeling.

    "Pretending that the words don't mean a thing
    Turn my head away.
    It doesn't hurt."

    Not sure if there is suppose to be any punctuation it's just habbit forming I suppose.

    Great job in expression here.