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allways to far

look around
what do you see
do you see me
i'm right here
i sceam to be heard
but there's no sound
transparency is realized
to not see
i'm not here
way away from you
we separate
a slow powerful force
extend my reach for you
but you can't see
don't say good bye

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  • Tazmanian Poet
    March 3, 2008
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    WOW.

    okay so i absolutely love this with everything.I am so serious.God,talent must run through your veins.I doubt i could ever write anything so freaking amazing.I love this!
    a slow powerful force
    extend my reach for you
    but you can't see
    don't say good bye
    That is my fave line.
    Keep it up.