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Robyn (Coeur D'alene)

It seems to me that you were afraid
To hold my hand and smile that day
We held each others dreams so high
And sang a secret lullaby
I remember well that rainy day
When all our worries washed away
A feeling and a memory
Was all that I could barely see
I wish that I could (be) again
I wish that we were more than friends
A certain time
A special place
In between
This melody
I remember well that rainy day
When all our worries washed away
A feeling and a memory
Was all that I could barely see

Author notes

**My first Music Video**
 myspace.com/seandogsean

 

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  • davidwright silver member
    November 20
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    Very nicely done both melody and lyric. I'm curious - what's a Texas boy like you doing with photos of Coeur d' Alene, Idaho?

    Happy trails.


  • A. Rose
    December 31, 2008
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    I love this. I can really see the feeling behind it. Amazing job. :]


  • jacklyn
    April 14, 2008
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    i like it

    it caught my attention quickly and kept, i must see and hear more

  • bluebubble
    January 31, 2008
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    the music and the poem relly connect


  • pantress silver member
    January 27, 2008

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    An up and coming STAR

    Music video? great, this poem sounds so familiar. I'm sure ive read it before, i thought i had commented it... my brain may not be working.lol Regardless of when and where, i know i liked it the first time too.

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