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Silent Insanity

A battle, waged inside my mind
Who will come out the winner?
Even if I win...
I still lose

A cry within my head
Resonating through my bones
Even if I scream
No sound comes out

A shattered soul is my disease
I cannot vocalize it--
Like a curse upon my voice
My silent insanity

Author notes

The username? It's WereVampyre.
A short piece on "silent insanity"--knowing there's something wrong, something completely wrong, but keeping it within myself because I don't know any other way to cope.

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  • beautiful.obsession
    March 29
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    amazing


  • anawarfare
    April 22, 2008
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    Great poem

    i loved it! I hope things get better for you


    • Avalanche.Echo
      April 22, 2008
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      Thanks so much I hope so too.


      • anawarfare
        April 23, 2008

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        your welcome~you deserved it, it was a great write-if you ever need someone to tlk too i'm here for ya! =)


  • Morrigan Trinity
    January 28, 2008

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    Love it. I feel this way all the time. My mom doesn't want to believe that I'm bi-polar because it would make my life so complicated. Or that I'm a schizo because her father was and he killed himself. I also must suffer in silence.

    • Avalanche.Echo
      January 29, 2008
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      Thanklies. My mom doesn't want to believe anything either, even though I attempted suicide--she blames the fact that I read the book Cut.


  • lost n confused
    January 28, 2008
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    hey good luck and great poem I LOVED IT

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