It takes time
to realize
That...
Change
isn't hard.
It's keeping promises
already made
That destroys you.
Author notes
17 words inspire by:
"Living your ghost"
- Apocalyptica [Letting The Cables Sleep feat. Bush]
In a list
A contest entry
- 17 Words by Exodus.
300 points, ended January 29, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i like this..lots of food for thoughts..like we change but the others dont....you said you said....good write
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There is wisdom and skill lurking in these words. Lessons for learning wrapped in reading for pleasure. ---- Thank you.
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Whoah.
Very intense take on the prompt.
But very true...
Thank you
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Thanks And thanks for the contest.
This was my second Apocalyptica inspired poem, so it was cool to write.
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pretty powerful for 17 words, a lot of truth to this
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Thanks And it's always the killer promises that people remember you made.
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