What would happen
If celebrities weren't just people?
What would happen
If we were called upon to answer for mistakes?
What would happen
Were we to attack the lawyer with his perfect speech?
Life as we know it
Would cease to exist.
Who would cry for
Single mothers' parental rights?
Who would scream for
Little childrens' soccer games?
Who would terrorize
Us for the sheer pleasure of doing so?
Life as we know it
Would be so different, so predictable.
How would we be
If we had to fight for the help?
How would we be
If no one helped at all?
How would we be
If the hardships we face everyday were meant to be faced alone?
Life would as we know it
...Would cease, fail to exist, die out.
Author notes
Society is based on the need to know that there are others out there who makes mistakes, our need to know, that whether or not we feel alone, we are not.
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'Emotion~Overrated~Underappreciated~Overwhelming
A contest entry
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300 points, ended August 22, 2008, 18 entries
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This is a strong deep write, Love it! It gives something to think about! Bravo
Good Luck! ~Katie -
very nice, I think that this is oen of the hardest qusetions to answer. I wrote it well. Very deep, deeper than most 15 year-olds. Good job.
U rock!
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gee, thanks dude. make me feel great... LORL
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hmm
I really, really like this piece, I have a clue! this is totally a make you think about it piece, i love the way you've written it, the stanza's flow nicely and smoothly, good imagry and description, great one!
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