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My Dedication To You, My Love(Part One)

The days have rolled by
Since our last chat
And our last goodbye
Left no knowing where were at

The hours have melted away
Since I heard your loving voice
I have had so much I want to say
But I don’t have a choice

So I’ll try
To speak my mind
Without starting to cry
As all my pain and thoughts become intertwined

I can’t believe
All we’ve been through
I can’t even conceive
Why God blesses me with you

I sit here marveling in
Of all you’ve taught me
From wiping the tears into a cheesy grin
To being able to see, what no one else dared to see

You’ve taken the burdens of lead
My weary heart couldn’t bear
You’ve stop the wounds that have bled
As old wounds and scars tear

Chris, you’ve loved me
Like no one else could
You took the time to see
What no else would


The past  year
Has opened up my eyes
And forced me to relinquish my fear
Of removing my disguise

Your distant heart beat has always comforted me
When you couldn’t be here
To see
That I defeated my fear

You shown me the definition of being loved
The past 10 months I have never
Felt unloved
Or seriously doubted our forever

You’ve taught me to love again
When I swore
Never again
Would there be someone to adore

Author notes

This is the rhyming one

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  • Musafir
    November 16, 2008

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    nice love poem with good rhyming.
    Best wishes,


  • Nicada silver member
    August 15, 2008

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    This is a beautiful tribute to the healing power of true and honest love. Nice job on this poem, and thanks so much for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty


  • BlackSwan
    July 22, 2008

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    This was sweetly done ^-^
    I particularly liked this stanza among the rest

    "Chris, you’ve loved me
    Like no one else could
    You took the time to see
    What no else would"

    Wonderful write. The only thing for me that didn't quite add up were certain lines didn't flow to well because some lines were a bit wordy.

    Other than that: Well done!
    -Good Luck


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 13, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry in our contest 'Rhyme and Flow'. An interesting poem with good rhyme, but unfortunately it has very little flow or rhythm to it, try reading it out loud to yourself and I hope you will see what I mean.
    Please join us in our future contests we look forward to reading more from you...Sue and Jeff


  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    June 24, 2008

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    this was wonderfully inspiring. thanks so much for sharing this with me. I really enjoyed the lovee and dedicAtion shown in this great write.


  • Metaphorist
    June 1, 2008
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    Beautiful piece. Thanks for entering.


  • kitty23
    May 25, 2008
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    omg this is so perfect

    i had one of my exs in here while i was judging to help me with my desicion and she told me if i didnt pick you as a winner i would be stupid

    thank you so much for entering my contest and thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with me

    good luck
    Kitty23


  • rose petal desires
    May 24, 2008

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    this brought up a few rivers of memories for me here i enjoyed your poetry thoughts here a lot dear artist thanks a lot

    rose petal desires


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    hey you did a really cool job with this it ran very smooth and it read like it was more from the heart best wishes to you in the contest

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