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Chasing the ghost.

Chasing love

through darkness

only to catch it

on the lawns of purgatory

my heart's in limbo.

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A contest entry

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  • B Chandler
    March 20, 2008

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    Who isn't in that place now and days? But loved the referencing of heart and love to purgatory


  • Luminescence
    March 3, 2008

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    wow... I really enjoyed reading this.... I love the lenght and the imagery that is painted in the poem... so much emotion in such a short peice...

    Thank you so much for entering and participating in my contest and good luck,
    ~lumin


  • Sagerider
    February 5, 2008

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    I love it

    Beautiful and thought provoking. One of the comments appears to be a mash note, which does not surprise me in the least lovely lady.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    February 1, 2008
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    This is poignant and well written

    Pass your heart
    into my hands
    caring for it
    I take seriously
    Limbo is not for love


  • Exodus gold member
    January 29, 2008
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    A very curious thought on the prompt,
    but lovely use of language.
    Thank you


  • William Vercelli
    January 27, 2008

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    wow....to fit such a meaningful idea into 17 words.....great work, and I love the last line. Good luck in the contest.

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