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It enchanted me, your melody
echoing in my mind as though
serenity never left its wonders

Somehow it marred my skin
with blushed hues of fantasy
lingering as if you were near

 

How often must it be replayed,

reds and greens of my aura

splattering cobalt hues of you

Lyrical affections tormenting
until breath no longer releases
the love you so often refuse

I could have told you my story,
wooden benched near sunset
without audience distractions

But you never showed interest
in veiled glances with a smile
and I shall never be plastic.


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  • Stirrer of Stardust silver member
    October 20
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    So, tell me now........

    ya All-Ways, ~ Jan ~


  • x Bright Eyes x
    October 9, 2008
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    hi this is a well writen piece here short and imagery is great thanks for entering and good luck


  • individuality gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    ah more fool this person then for not noticing and taking an interest, let them melt in the fires of ignorance. a good poem, soft and gentle all the way through and then a calm kick butt ending.


  • queen Moderators member
    February 1, 2008

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    oh my i love the last line so much, i shall never be plastic. I wish more people had the courage to think this way


  • AnnD Moderators member
    January 29, 2008

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    This has such a sad feel to it.... wistful yet yearning. Love which cannot be recaptured or regained. Beautifully written.

    Ann


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    January 28, 2008

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    Loved it...enchanting and flowing!

    Congrats on finishing the book, you must be smiling ear
    to ear. Will go and check the link so I can grow as
    a writer and feast upon your every words!
    Thankyou for remaining here with us on Ap.com, you really
    do make a powerful difference, even if some are too
    shy to comment on your poems.
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen : )) loved it!
    and I shall never be plastic! roar!


  • Rose Patrick
    January 28, 2008

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    your poems are always so good i enjoy all of them i read. i wish that i could write like you some times.i sure that you will have a great day. and may the god bless you my friend


  • Providence
    January 27, 2008

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    Oh tlak about positive energies moving through a piece. This one shown all the colours of the rainbow while the reader drifted along eventually coming to rest in a reality many are familiar with!

    N I I I I ICE!

    Marianne


  • penman gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    Fantastic

    I really enjoy getting to read these poems again you are posting from your book. Each is so special and gifted.


  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    January 27, 2008

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    no one wants to be plastio, good write sweetie!

    this one sounds like a lover that didn't work out...

    keep on penning!

    mike

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