There's nothing left to do...there's nothing left to say.
Because no more words can tell how much suffering you put me through.
No words can describe the pain and heartache you caused when you beat me until I was black and blue, crying until the clock struck two, face as wet as morning dew.
No more words can say how much sadness and hate I feel towards others because of what you did to me.
The way you used and abused my sacred temple was wrongfully opened as my treasured jewel was taken by your evil,vile hands.
No more words can say how lifeless and broken you made me become in an hour from the way your once gorgeous strong body tore and broke my weak small on to shreds.
Because of you I now feel still and dead when you pulled out, making me scream and shout in pain and discomfort.
No more words can describe the sleepless nights of your face haunting my once pleasant dreams, replaying your dirty sick deed over and over again.
There's nothing left to do...there's nothing left to say.
Because no more words can tell how much you violated and scared me for life.
Author notes
BlueMoon Goddess
Poetry for life
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Comments
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Amazing emotion. I felt it and saw it. Wonderful....so sad.
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Lots of emotion. This could use improvement by not forcing the rhyme. Besides that, well written poem. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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*damn*
thats just about too much emotion!!! you sure hate tha dude, hua? Anyway good job and good luck in my contest:-)
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This is a well written poem on such a horrible subject. No one should ever have to go through anything like this. You expressed the emotions here very well. Great job and thanks for entering.
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