"Do you believe in unconditional love?"
That cliche saying
you think you know
but no one bears to feel.
"It depends."
The unanimous response
so overused
but usually all thats true.
You can never be sure
of what you don't know
and this goes without second thought
if love is real,
and passion exists
everyone might as well
put a gun against their head.
pull
the
trigger
now
they're
dead.
Author notes
okay kathryn, chill. yes, it is me!!!! Poetry Addict!mwhahahahaha okay here: Purple bunnies like pink frosting
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired; Come and See!! by LuckyBlackCat.
800 points, ended February 11, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hehe i'm back...
"thank you emma" she says sweetly... -
yay! but...one problem...you didn;t read the directions!!! omg. read them again..then edit this.
BESIDES THAT....
awesome job. i can see you got inspiration from heart. and thanks to her, i know who you are now. i also agree with dragontears about the edge the poem has...nice job and thanks for entering.
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Oysh! Wow. This has a heck of a lot behind it! This is so well done and I love the way it all the sudden turns so cold at the end. It gives the poem real edge.
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very thought provoking, had a darker twist in the end, didn't expect that. good luck in the contest
CherryKiss
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lol, i liked it a lot better than mine. nice job Emma! the last part was definitely my favorite.
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