Into the shadows she peers
Searching thought the riddled remoteness
Reflections of past lives trickle
In the shadows as Black Diamond lingers
Glittering in the present, a legend from days past
In the morning sun Tamari presents himself
Perched on the back of raven
As Raven the Black Diamond softly touches down
For the first time in many generations
Tamari shows himself
In this the Meadow of New Beginnings.
I am Iszara leader of the Mystic Dawn
Keeper of shackled secrets that must never be knew
I am Tamari rider of the Black Diamond
I am he that has become enemy of the Mystic Dawn
Once I was a member of this league of secrets
I am he that was once betrayed
You are not of the league of mystic dawn
But you will join the realm of legends
you will be a rider, a Paladin Dragon Warrior
Together we will reclaim justice.
Iszara watch’s as Tamari approaches Raven
With one hand raised over his head
Tamari shouts “Steal Of Raven”
In his hands Tamari holds a shimmering black sword
Which he drives deep into the chest of Raven
Raven calls out from an unknown language
I call upon my forefathers a New Beginning
Tamari pulls his blade from the chest of Raven
With great strength
Drives the Steal of Raven in a Hugh bolder
I call upon my Warrior forefather
A blessing of New Beginnings
Iszara and Tamari are both shrouded in a great mist
Suddenly flames erupt into the empty morning shy
which burns away the mist
Standing beside Raven is Vogue
Iszara Approach your dragon
Do as you seen of me, ask Vogue her steal
with hand raised Iszara speaks “ Steal Of Vogue”
In her hand she holds a shimmering metallic green sword
Iszara now you are a dragon rider
You are from this day onward
A Paladin Dragon Warrior, you are my apprentice
I will teach you the secrets of the mystic dawn
We are a New beginning
Author notes
This is the second poem of a dragon sags the first is called Mystic dawn
Please tell me what you think
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Well done. I love the era you write about as I've always been drawn to castles and such. And to be a dragon-rider, even one in training, sounds like an incredible thing. You have a very creative mind.
Thank you for sharing.
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Story poems are brilliant. especially ones about fantasy . now i must go read its prequel.
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loved it
very well written and so full of grapic description takes one to the time and place awesome writing
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great Job Joe. Image forming and a terrific story line. You developed this wonderfully. Looking forward to reading more of this. Hey if you still have that copy of that bood you were working on email it to me again.
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You are on a roll! This is quite a story, very engrossing and you have left us all anticipating the next installment... as they build their New World!
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The imagery is amazing. I can really
visualize this. You paint quite a story
with your words. This is great, and I am
not normally into this type of stories, but
this captures you and pulls you in. Terrific
as always, my dear friend.
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Joe this is magical.Tamari was hell
You have written a beautiful warriors story.
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Love it --- looking forward to more
Paladin: I LOVE it. This is so marvelous and a GREAT second chapter to this saga. I eagerly await further episodes.
Lady D
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