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An End

'I shouldn't look back'
but I just can't help it
what happened could've
been prevented

I realize it was passion,
when you are young
you think passion  will
come again and again

I sadly look out my window
and the rain keeps falling
what I  left behind me
was very good but some times
good things come to an end

 

Author notes

I know it might be hard for some to comprehend the poem, I just entered. But it's what came to me when I looked at the photo. Plus on a rainy day, it's hard to keep Scott Walker's song out of my head.

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  • EverxEnding silver member
    January 28, 2008

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    Nice write.
    I love that it's simple yet to the point.
    Emotion packed and I can feel the back story behind it.
    Awesome take on the prompt. Good luck!