She sits alone
Watching the waves
Lap against the shore
Her wings arched behind her back
Her piercing blue eyes
Search the horizon
For something unknown
A ball of ghostly
White light
It stares back at her
Glazed within her gaze
Amongst a shore
With lapping waves
Author notes
I've always wondered what a moon watcher feels.Option E~Harvest Moon
Name ariAysel
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Is the moon a spiritual object?
Comments
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This is exquisite! I love how you have created this piece! You are I believe the only one who has chosen this specific option. I would suggest that maybe you don't capatalize every line, and maybe combine a few to better the flow of this magnificant piece. Just my suggestions, nothing to be taken heavily to heart, besides it's your master piece, not mine.
Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck!
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Very good. You described a peaceful atmosphere, calmy searching for the moon.
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