The candle is lit
my questions
unanswered
could he?
of course not
I am foolish
burning flames
caress my skin
like his hands
knowing this is
burning me
alive
inside
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Comments
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wow in such little words you expressed such great emotion. i enjoyed reading this peice.
thank you so much for entering and good luck in the contest. -
What deep pain is expressed here. The imagery is so powerful. This really touched me:
"burning flames
caress my skin
like his hands
knowing this is
burning me
alive
inside"
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