You gave me my first taste
Damn how I love the curves in your waist
you taste oh so sweet,
but between your legs, that was the treat..
So warm and so hot, man how I wanted what you got
I've never felt anything like this before
damn the more I touch the more I wanted more.
The taste was so incredible noone wonder it was made edible.
It was so warm and so wet
That was one night Ill never regret
you showed me how to please you
you told me to watch everything you do
Just to see your beautiful body squirm with pleasure, damn I came all over myself,
I was so weak feeling all inside of you,
damn I want to taste and feel you every time we meet
Fuck what everybody thinks
They can call me what they want,
they can say what they wanna say
damn they just mad cuz they aint getting none anyway....
To Be Continued....
1/26/08
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Another well written piece!
Well done and keep it up.
I love your thoughts here!
Jeremy0826 -
repeatable
You gave me my first taste
Damn how I love the curves in your waist
you taste oh so sweet,
but between your legs, that was the treat..
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lol Haters. I loved the flow
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Thanks, I so glad you took time out to read it!
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I loved the style and rhythm of this poem. The last line, "They just mad cuz they ain't getting none anyway..." made me chuckle.
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Damn.....wat more can u say after dat!!!!
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You Go Girl
Damn, this is some hot stuff you are laying down, I for one ain't mad at you, you get yours cuase I got to get mine, LOL. Hot ass write,thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Ah yes the pleasures of the flesh. Nicely done and graphic almost like a short porn flik. Happy trails
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Real Talk
absolutely...I loved this!
Ephiphany♥
BTW...'they' are always Mad
I feel you on this. -
I ain't mad at cha!!
You do what you do and let them be mad because I ain't mad at all. I just wanna know can I watch or maybe be the one who participates. I love the words. I love the style. I love the flow. You are very talented and need to be recognized. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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great
I'm british your poem is probabaly one of the best i'vr read here honest but still with sense of fun. -
Very expressive
I can feel the dripping desire that is captured in this. Towards the end, the poem got a little weaker than in the beginning. There are some spelling errors such as waist (waste) and cam (came), but overall an amazingly hot expression of desire. -
This is some good shit...I want more!!!
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