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To a Mother Who Is Gone

if i cry out,
will it fall upon deaf ears?

if i reach for help,
will no one help me?

if i cry,
will someone wipe away my tears?

if i die,
will someone mourn my death?

if i wake up screaming,
will someone sooth my fears?

if i need to be comforted,
will i have a shoulder to lean on?

if i make a mistake,
will someone punish me?

if i told you i missed you,
would you come back to me?

if i had said 'i love you' more,
would you never have left?

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  • bangbaby
    April 15, 2008

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    very sad my dear
    well said none the less
    i am sorry for the emtion you are feeling
    we ofen wonder what if!
    thanks much for the poem i wish you the best!