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Im a very freaky girl.....remix

You want a very freak girl,
come into Nia's world
you aint gone wanna leave just like a kid
at Disney World.

My deep throat have you squirtung like a water gun
Coochie over flowing like somebody let the faucet run.

Bust one nut I aint
done, I got mo to come,
friends- tell mo to come
we gone have some orgy fun
Chew on it like some bubble gum
I lick you like a lolly pop
Once you taste my honey bun

Its our little secret just like my underwear
you know pain is pleasure can you make me shed a tear
smack my ass, grab my neck
got'em cummin everywhere
Im a freak so I dont care
Just don't get none in my hair

Now you callin me wifey, and you wanna introduce me
taking me on shopping sprees and wanna by Gucci

Damn we aint even fuck yet I just let u eat my coochie.....

To Be Continued....


Author notes

Its kinda a rap...so when you are reading u have to put a little pep in the lyrics for the to kinda make sense.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 4

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    This is great girl! It's always good to read
    a new rap especially one like this! lol
    Thanks for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826

  • mcfreeman
    June 19, 2008
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    Gawd, woman you've

    made a fan of this man.


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    June 18, 2008
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    Oh that was damn good girl

  • CountryGun
    March 10, 2008
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    yeeeaaaaahh thats fuckin awesome baby id love to go in your world


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 8, 2008

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    Fantastic erotic writing here. Wonderful piece of writing and great imagery all the way through.

    Well done for this
    All the best
    Wayne Leon


  • Ephiphany
    February 10, 2008

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    BRAVO!!!!!

    This is HOT lyrics you got here ladyh
    I see Kadafie is a fan he's good people.
    I liked this a lot, got a nice rhyme to it along with the upbeat in reading it really helps.

    Great job!

    Ephiphany♥

  • New-n-Improved
    February 5, 2008

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    I'm A Very Freaky Nigga!

    This is hot. I love this poem very much. I wish I was the guyin this poem eating the coochie. I promise it wouldbe a different song then. I can do all those things thatyou just described and guess what? I would be willing to please you body and want nothing in return. Anyway, keep up the good work. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.


  • corrughadh
    February 5, 2008
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    your the best out of all i read!

    truly great work funny and you have skill.


  • Tortured Poet
    January 27, 2008
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    I Love It!

    Im not a big fan of rap...but I do listen to sum...you are good!! You gonna b famous someday gurl!

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