When its time to go
to sleep and dream
of dancing in a ballarina
outfit or of making
cookie with you on
Christmas morning
mom I'll have a simple request
(~)Read Me A Bed Time Story (~)
so I can dream a happy dream
Author notes
I dont know...wanted to write a new poem, something cute, something kiddy..and well this came out. You like?
Written November 15th, 2003
What did you think
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yeah, i wasnt really tryin to spell some stuff right. cause its suppose to from a kid....
Blessed Little One -
hm ballerina is misspelled but it fits with the kiddy theme so whoo really cares its cute
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This is good. It is the little things in life that are the best times. This is a very good poem. ~thanks for sharing~
BruisedAndBroken -
Wasup Steph. I know that you aint the happiest camper in the world wit me. I don't blame you, I aint happy wit myself too much either. But things happen for a reason, so if you could look at me for me and see what kinda person I really am and not judge me by my mistakes, then you will notice that I'm gettin my life on track. And I'm doin what it is I gotta do to survive and to live. Granted I gotta son and yeah me and his mom was together at one time, but that don't mean I didn't and don't love your sister. She knows exactly how I felt and how I still feel. And I wanted to tell you that I'mma always be there as her friend if not more. What I did was one of the biggest mistakes in my life, but I know if I can be forgiven for it then there is hope for every nigga out there. Remember though, you're like a sister to me, so don't act like we aint cool.
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the simple pleasures in life are the times that we spend with our parents no matter what it is that we do together, cookies, reading or just hanging out. Take time today to say I love you, and watch a sunrise on your parents face. Lissa
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this is a great poem i like it alot it is soooooooooooooo wonderfull it showes that you want your mom to read you a bed time story now thats great good job you did a wonderfull job on this poem you are a excelent poet and you should never stop lots of love mini-desire
ps. wonderfull just wonderfull
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This is beautiful and I have two kids so I love to read to them~ Very cute and I bet many children can relate~ I love it~ Keep it coming~Big hugs
and much love~Desire
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I remember wishing my mother would do that. In my family my dad would put on christmas music at night for the week prior to christmas...we would strand popcorn, and christmas eve we would put the last strand on the tree. In my later years when my parents became religious we sat and traded off (there were 11 or us) to read parts of the christmas story out of the bible. Now that I am grown up and out of the house for 5 years..I dont know where I am from year to year (still bouncing between grandparents for the kids) so the 2 times I have had christmas here, I let my boys bake cookies, set out milk, make a drawing for Santa, and add something they made to the other's stocking. They are still to young to care about christmas as a whole, but one of these days.
Well now that ya got me rambling on remembering my childhood...great poem...brings back sooo much good memories, the ones I miss. Thanks
~~Jenn -
though I hate mom, I still think this poem rocks! so sweet, makes me dream of something I never experienced...
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WOW
I like this poem a lot because i think it shows that no matter how hard we try we'll never truly grow up and we'll always have time to be with our moms. You write really well and seek the truth... Keep writing Later -
I like it a lot. Very nicely done... and I think that what you were striving for came out just fine. *sonya*
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