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Another's Kiss

Enraged at life, she cries out
Wondering what went wrong
She thought they had forever
But, it seems it didn’t last long
Entranced by a beauty, he fell
And acted with a lust
That broke the bonds of matrimony
And ultimately broke their trust
Despite my efforts to console
It appears it was in vain
Despite what I have attempted
Her eyes still share that pain
For, Despite his inhibitions
That shattered the bonds they made
She told me that she loved him
And that won’t ever fade away
Now, I can’t say that I don’t admire
Her courage and her faith
But something in hers fading
And I don’t know what to say
So god please grant her peace
At least away from this
It really isn’t worth her tears
If he’s shared another’s kiss 

Author notes

I chose number 13. It doesn't exactly go into how she caught him, but it was a friend of mine who just recently learned about her husband cheating on her. I've been trying to be a good friend and help her through this so it's been on my mind a lot lately.

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  • gothicchildren05
    February 12, 2008

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    it's not worth the tears but she is still inlove. usually when someone turns around and does something like this, it's because they feel as though something is missing in the relationship. something that used to be there but isn't there anymore. they want some kind of excitement....something they used to have. I do hope things work out for your friend. I know I still love my fiance...so, perhaps he just chose the wrong thing at the time and made a mistake he regrets and maybe he still loves your friend. either way, I wish her luck. if she does not want to forgive and he doesn't want her to forgive him, then hopefully she will find someone that is true to her and the relationship. best of luck. and thank you for entering.