A beautiful woman. A wonderful friend
yet you spit upon her angelic face.
A gentle heart who will stay true to the end,
and you give her heart warmed name disgrace.
A viper hidden beneath your sweet dark hand.
A man whose intentions are to cheat.
A brooding devil says "love be damned."
A vermin who I would no sooner beat.
A heart that would break to learn the vicious lie.
You put me in torment you rat of hell.
Should I say what you are? Nay I'd rather die.
Only to keep her well I would not tell.
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I need prayers because I'm in a horrible situation. I don't know what to do and I already have so many things going wrong. I don't know how much more I can handle. It has to do with a married couple I know.
Please tell me what you think
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You have my prayers. The poem is well done.
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This sounds like it could be a situation that could lead to a breakup of a marriage, an unfaithful husband of a good friend perhaps? What to do, sentiments expressed well in these lines - easy to read and understand; good rhythm, rhyme and flow in these verses. May you find the right solution to this predicament.
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Aww.. dear sounds like a predicament....I pray to Almighty that all turnout well..
Besides that it is a beautiful poem with good flow and rhyme.
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Thank you, and thank you for your prayers.
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You are welcome dear
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E-mail me about it.
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