The weight has been lifted off my wings
I know I'm finally free
The cage that I once lived in
Is no longer holding me
I've broken out all on my own
With no one's help at all
I've sailed out of this place
I've busted down the wall
All this time I've been sitting in there
Lonely and depressed
But I know this choice that I have made
Was definatly the best
I'm flying away from all this time
I've been quietly attacked
I'm getting farther, happier than ever
And I'm not looking back.
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It took me a while to get this to rhyme right in general, so please comment!
Please Comment!!! PLEASE
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I hope you are finally free KT! Wow that rhymed. I'm a poet and I didn't even know it. *snorts geekily* But I've noticed she has had lots of affect on you, since you write about her a lot. I hope you aren't too sad, but than sadness is a good muse for poetry. lol. I'm confused is soap girl her nickname. Cause I don't want to be calling the wrong girl soap girl. That would be AWKWARD! LOL
XX,
NATALIE..
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...Soap girl?
that's interesting, lol. I liked the poem
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yeahh, that's the name kathryn and i came up with. ask her.
thanks foh da comment tho!
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woot! nice rhyme. i like it. so is this a big metaphor for what you have done with soap girl? i hope you are finally free of her.
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yes and yes i think i am but thanks for the comment
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