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The Feast

Dark countenance

gorging on heart light

 

     simple phrase

         "I am not here"

 

 

virtue kept in an ewer.

 

 

In a list

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  • Exodus gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    Simple and complex all at once.
    Really lovely from start to finish, thank you


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    an amazing take on the prompt really captures it and just wow mommy i love the way you penned this best of luck