you look at me and say things
well guess what i am who i am
so if you do not like it not my fault
i am who i am
the girl you see is me
there is no changing me
i shall lose weight but other than that
no one can change the girl i am
so its not my problem if you do not like me
i am who i am
i do not care what anyone thinks of who i am
so keep your opinions to your self
this is who i am so deal with it
i shall never change who i am
but i may look diffrent
but i am the same person as i always was
A contest entry
- Could you... by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
900 points, ended February 2, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Being on one's own is what everyone likes, but not everyone is... We live for others most of the times, and find no time thinking about what we are and why we live. This poem is really beautiful... the key idea to say that there no change in 'who i am' to a person whom we loved is something painful, though we are ready to be on our own...
Good luck in the contest
Thanks for sharing
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-Kiddy -
a beautiful write which holds alot of strength and truth in your words.powefully penned well done and best of luck
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