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After The Storm

We all have the days
everything is so much
We just want to hide
not to face the problems.

When life is hard to bare
when the storm has passed
We should reminds us
that the storm of life doesn't last.

After the life's storm
every tears of rain drops
our eyes will be cleared
and the sky is clear.

After the storm is over
the dark clouds rolled away
and the sun tries to peak out.
The sky is clear.

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    February 11, 2008

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    This is a great piece just hang in there tomorrow will be a better day the sun will shine again much love always


  • bethan-gaze
    January 28, 2008

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    So right. It's just a case of 'hanging on in there' whilst the storm is raging. Beautifully penned. x


  • tawk gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    Thanks this is such a true write. Life can be so hard at times but we manage to somehow get through it to another day. I know I have. Yes we should see the blessings in everyday Excellent write


  • Katie Lazette
    January 27, 2008

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    Thank you for reminding us that after the storm there is an abundance of sunshine and smiles. Nice write Janie5

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    January 27, 2008
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    It's just hanging on until "the sky is clear"..Very good write...

    Lady D


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    January 27, 2008

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    Hope is a wonderful thing and we truly can be certain that:

    "This too shall pass"

    you have made me smile today. ~Pamela


  • Sandygram
    January 27, 2008
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    Your poem was lovely. Yes after the storm comes the sunshine and after the tears come the smiles. Life is a combination of both and as the old saying goes," Into each life a little rain must fall." So very true!! Thank you for sharing this lovely poem with us. Sandy a

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