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Transcendental




Unacquainted with the uninvited.
Souls unspoken, left to lurk.
Seeking closure through closed
hallways, lingered amid murk.










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  • Exodus gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    The subtle alliteration was wonderful.
    I'm not sure what else to say. This read fluidly, without any sticking points, really a great read. Thank you.


  • Kari gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    This was really creepy and leaves a very amazing picture in your mind that gives you chills.
    Well done!