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Under the Bed

Mind's broom
never touches
fear's moaning
dust bunnies.

Failure's specters
murmur
beneath sheets
worn as excuse's
comforter.

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prompt living your ghosts

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  • Exodus gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    Very hard hitting yet it flows through the mind without sticking. Really beautiful from start to finish. Thank you


  • going nowhere
    January 28, 2008

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    great metaphors! you know me... love them!
    good luck in the contest.


  • Erika Elektrikka
    January 27, 2008

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    ooohh, nice use of metaphor's. Excellent job, my friend.

    Erika