muffled memories
loss of a bluebell
lilies and daffodils
forget-me-nots
pit filled with sorrow
marigold cloaked
purple taints violet
soaked summer breeze
lavender ribbon
wreathe of salt rivers
dryad-dyed dandelions
count autumn years
Author notes
Option 5
A tear is deeper than the sea.
Samuel Jacob Imber (1889-1942)
In a list
A contest entry
- Let's Do This Quick Like Bunnies by Jasmine Rayne.
310 points, ended January 30, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really liked this piece. It's beautiful and it speaks to me. Thank you very much for entering and good luck in the contest. ^_^
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Thank you so much for the recognition ...
I enjoyed entering this contest!
Best wishes with your own poetic experimentations.
Love
Myra
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A wonderful write my loving friend.... "soaked summer breeze" is a phenomenol line..... very visual. I may need to steal that line for a haiku one day soon!!!
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I don't know how you do this, it seems so simple, yet it has depth of emotion. I must go and meditate!
Good luck!
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now try to step away from cliché:
muffled memories
loss of a bluebell
lilies and daffodils
forget-me-nots
fill this pit with sorrow
marigold cloaked
purple bitten violet
soaked summer breeze
lavender ribbon
wreathe of salty rivers
dryad-dyed
dandelions
count the autumn years
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