Place an "X" in the appropriate space
___ Good
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Author notes
Once
Once I was as good as I wanted to be
Once I was so terribly bad to me
Once I reached for that outstretched hand
Once I was that ugly and selfish man
Once I remembered how much I had cried
That, unfortunately, was the day I died
A contest entry
- 180th Contest by Tarja.
400 points, ended January 28, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I totally give you props for originality. I could just see local smart ass kids marking the yes and no all the time.
This is really interesting thanks for entering and good luck.
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shouldn't it be *an* not and?? x
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YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Thank you ... made the change .............
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