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[ To be re birthed ]

To be re birthed
I would smile
and taste the
entire earth

Would paint from
an early age and
take in all that is
within

Jackson Pollock, i
would be,  to see
and feel the colors
and the emotion as he
flung his angry brush

Inner emotion and deep
deep inside pain

His remembrance is what
his spirited gained

I have no children to re
member me,  but Jackson pol
lock is still remembered today

To remembered and to be loved
is within me,  so if I had to
be re birthed,  Jackson Pollock
is what I would be.


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  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    April 8, 2008
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    LIONS HAVE PRIDE!

    Loved this entire piece, I don't know who Jackson Pollock is, but he must be a great person for you to wish to come back as him...I found this to be uplifting and uniquely fresh, I'm so pleased it was awarded a trophy, congratulations on the HM

    Love and smiles...
    ~Lilac


  • Desire gold member
    April 6, 2008
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    Lions Have Pride!!

    Oh My
    Love this piece You have penned~
    Powerful message and emotions
    Magnificent!!

    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Keep that quill dancing...
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • StarEyes
    April 4, 2008

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    LIONS HAVE PRIDE!!!

    What a great read!! I love this, I am sorry to say that I am unfamiliar with Jackson Pollock, but sounds like someone worth checking into! Great Job!!

    Congrats on the Honorable Win!!


  • Star Shine
    April 4, 2008

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    LIONS HAVE PRIDE!

    This is great, not only in the choice of subject, but in your rhythmic word choices that portray an appetite for life. Well done.


  • Unsigned gold member
    April 4, 2008

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    LIONS HAVE PRIDE!

    Fantastic....straight from the heart...I really loved the expression you used here... He was angry and in pain and I think we all to some extent know how that feels...

    You did great here poet..

    Best wishes

    Simon...


  • islekine gold member
    January 27, 2008
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    Great write!

    Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on.
    *PEACE*

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