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In Silence

I sit in silence
I sit alone
overwhelmed what is
and what is not

A contest entry

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  • Exodus gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    Interesting take on the prompt,
    A little abstract (or maybe I'm not reading it right).
    Nevertheless the format worked to enhance the piece.
    Thank you