Fabulous grace its striking power
Laden with praise a pretty flower
Oasis of petals in swirls shower
Whisper to them sweetly, softly
Ecclectic colours strong and lofty
Rainy radiance on a petal shiny!
Author notes
First off, I love flowers! Secondly.. I love oases!
An acrostic poem with rhyme.
Please tell me what you think
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This is a beautifil composition in image and motion. Your rhyme scheme and meter add depth and are penned perfectly.
Love,
Amera♥
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Flowers all have a meaning i will send you a poem that you might see their words.
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a good poem, and with spring here now flowers will be blooming away and smiling at the world, a nice flow and form
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Your words are sweet and soft... just like a precious flower. I felt they moved sensationally!! well done!
Melanie
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You have written quite a good acrostic here. It's short, but has a lot of imagery in it in fact
Thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the very best!
Leander -
I enjoyed your poem a lot...it was short, but very detailed with such emotion. Good luck with the contest!
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This is very beautifully penned! i too love flowers! thank you for entering my contest and i wish you good luck!
NineTailedFox -
gorgeous feel
A nice interesting use of "fabulous" and "ecclectic" very different bringing beauty to public light. "grace" and "praise" the delicate honoring of something naturally innocent. The "swirls" and "softly" nice visual movement, "strong" and "lofty" the presence of endurance naturally (we all can use this more often!), and lastly "rainy radiance on a petal shiny!" a gorgeous ending, I can smell the soft warm rain!!!
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Thank you so much!
Blessings!
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