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Walking Through Shadows

Though alive
I walk through shadows
Unseen like a ghost
And though alive
I live in death.

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  • stoneage silver member
    July 16

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    Are you sad?
    This winter I discovered depression.
    Hey but I’m still here.
    Fuck the shadows,
    they are simply caused by fools
    standing in front of our sun.
    When I have enough wrinkles, pain and age
    I will pass once more, through a birth canal
    into the arms of a new mother.
    Life is the great discovery.
    Stoneage. Is getting stoned, but at least the crowd
    has settled down, they’re throwing nerf balls at me instead of rocks.

  • suseann
    May 30

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    This resonates with memories in my own lifetime. And at times still find myself there too. To live,is to know these feelings and express them. Remember,"none are so blind as those who cannot see". In reflecting on this train of thoughts. It lends more alive essence of your being seen ,then those blinded to you being here.Events in one's life in heavy emotional upevil can make us feel this way. So.... basically,I'm saying in all of this. You've moved me. The intentional reason of writing poetry!


  • myrataal silver member
    March 16

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    Ah but Poet!

    Death is an illusion ... Did you know? And this life is unreal ... it is but preparatory ... Do not care not to be seen ... Being invisible is special, for in the soul the true Light lives eternally.

    Atmospheric write, and universal thought ... for our Home is not here.

    Love to you, Pozo ... I was led here to read this poem of yours. And I send a thought of compassion to you.



    Myra


  • catz Moderators member
    February 8

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    A very thoughtful and profound write, pozo. A most impressive piece. Your writing is very deep sometimes and always good

    Love and
    Mom

  • Revwilliamfoos
    January 30

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    This is truly a powerful thought sometimes i feel as if i am transparent and go unnoticed through life as if in death. keep doing well my friend
    love the rev papa


  • Friday gold member
    January 29

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    Wow, very interesting take on the prompt, certainly different than I would have thought given the song. Thank you

  • Hekate gold member
    January 27

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    I think that all of us live like this come to think of it This was really good, and thought provoking.
    Kari

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