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---------Here lies Lord Tom Box---------
--------------1986 - 2008-------------------
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---------In some fortuitous way----------
--------I am quite sure that you,---------
--------Perusing this carving now,-------
-------Along with the rest of this--------
----------Degenerate society,------------
------Assisted my untimely demise.-----
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-------Your continued existence,--------
-----And the termination of mine-------
-----Is a perversion which I hope-------
---Will haunt you to your own grave.--
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-------------------R.I.P---------------------
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Author notes
Once.
For the contest: 'Your Tombstone'
So, here's what I would like on my
grave-stone. It pretty much sums up
how I feel about the world, and how
the repulsive mass of filth we call
society is slowly dissolving my
will to live. Everyone will be
accountable for my demise, for
everyone has contributed to this
puny excuse for existance.
A contest entry
- 180th Contest by Tarja.
400 points, ended January 28, 2008, 25 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Is it your time?
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Wow! This was so amazing. I loved what you said on your stone and what it stands for and how you made it and everything this was an all around amazing piece and I thank you so much for entering it. Let's hope 2008 isn't when you die though!
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[don’t let them chisel “existance” like that on your tombstone] I like this. Some times an epitaph needs a little snap in it. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks for the spelling heads-up
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bloody fucking awesome
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AWESOME!!!
The truth in this is indescribable.
I'm sure you will have a very unique stone.
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Haha. Best grave stone ever. Though your grave stone shape did turn out a bit distorted. Looks kinda like a sillouhette of a penguin
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