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The tomb of Jeff, King of Rhyme

Here lies Jeff Green under sand
Man of rhyme and passion fine
Shot by irate young husband
At the age of 109

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once upon a time I wrote once in my notes

A contest entry

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  • Tarja
    January 28, 2008

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    ... Wha?! This is gonna sound ... weird because maybe I misread something, but are you gay? ... Egh anyway... this was a great little thing to have on your tombstone thank you for entering and good luck.


    • cricketjeff gold member
      January 28, 2008
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      No not gay! The husband is irate, because the wife was very very happy!

      I can dream!

      • Tarja
        January 28, 2008
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        I'M SORRY I'M SO SLOW SOMETIMES AND I READ IT WRONG!


        • cricketjeff gold member
          January 28, 2008
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          Nothing whatsoever to be sorry for!
          But if I were maybe I wouldn't have written you a sonnet!!!


  • Amera gold member
    January 28, 2008

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    You playboy you, even till the very end.
    The King of Rhyme should have a rhyming Epitaph

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • lindaburns gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    OMG, you passion bunny.
    At 109 you had a honey?
    It was time that you turned in
    and left some women for younger men.
    Good luck with the contest.
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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    What can I say?


    • cricketjeff gold member
      January 27, 2008
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      Younger men can have their turn
      When through years that's what they earn
      Just for now I'd say it's fine
      To make the limit 49!


  • Riftkin gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    I see you living well into your prime
    for even the young age of 109
    would never really be a crime.

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