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deforestation




i stand camouflaged,
a single needle in the boughs of this pine--
you, the angel
fallen from the crown.

i am tipped with rust;
no longer will i be whole,
but helpless;

my time to fall has not come
and there is no happy child to pluck me,
to leave me for debris
on the forest floor.

the snow blankets my branch;
you rest in the sun.

and after the long years,
when the ever has left the green,
i will meet you
in the blazing shadows.




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my second attempt?

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  • lindarnoian
    January 28, 2008
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    great

    as usual i love your work and understand about 75% of it.