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plight as plant
unnourished to resound
with pollinators for mixup,
or time as to not beseech
with roots but bud the birch
better by others in axiom,
daffodil is principle

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good luck isn't a starting line

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though rose isn't clutter of clutch

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  • LadyLavender gold member
    January 30, 2008
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    I have to be honest I had a hard time on this write. I feel it went right over my head.