Jelly Beans, Swelly Beans,
get in My Belly Beans.
Red, Green and Pink,
I'll eat them all I think.
Cherry, Lime and Grape,
I Love their funny shape.
Messy, sticky faces,
With Beans stuck in their Braces.
Author notes
No notes today, every time I pass notes I get caught, and have to stay after class and clap erasers.
A contest entry
- Jelly Beans by Sunshine Princess.
550 points, ended January 28, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enhancing Reading and Reading Awareness (A Readership Program) by Hashnah Sheviatte.
700 points, ended May 16, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
An honest citique is well accepted
Comments
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don't know how this was over looked, i think it's great
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yum yum..ive not had a jelly bean in years king mark..maybe i will get some today for gwen and me..xxx
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Uhm,.. Very nice,. kids will surely love it,. as how you make it a mouth watering one,. and the rhymes were good
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What? No licorice beans?
This is darling & now you've got me craving black jelly beans...my fav! This is the child in you & everyone who can & does eat 'em! Great fun. Hope you won a prize!
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i sent for some online ages ago for a free packet, they sent me five in this miniature packet, i wanted more but i had to take what was given lol i suppose i will just have to buy them like everyone else.
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Wonderful
Very creative and well said. Great descriptions
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hahahahahaha!!!! This just great!!! Wonderful humor!!
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omg so cute
what a cute write...brought a smile to my face..your couplet form is a very nice touch..adds a bit of carefree to the write..thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest..
author's notes a nice added touch..
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GREAT! Did you read this to your kids? LOL What a fun li'l piece!
Paul
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Very cute. This would be a great children's poem.
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I love Jelly Beans they are my favorites
Often grab a pack or two and they are not for sharing they are all mine MINE and MINE !
Great write xx -
Get in my belly!
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Nice flow. Well done. LOL
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Thank you for the nice poem in my contest love Genna
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A good write. Very good rhythm. Good imagery, flow and tone. Nice rhyme. Lilting. Good depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. A fun read. Well penned. Best wishes in the contest.
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Nicely metred
The flow of your poem is highly enjoyable. Probably the best rhythm out of all the entries. Adorable descriptions too
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