Spoken for, she was his untouchable aim,
A manifestation of equidistant desires.
His body hungered for hers
In every conceivable manner.
He caressed her fair cheek, so softly
Sweeping back endless strands of gold.
His sapphire eyes, aflame with fervor
Fastened to her orbs of jade,
Celestially defined by sable curves.
Smoldering ardor radiated
From their amorous liaison,
As he fervently kissed
Her fine coral lips.
Saline tears flowed from her sultry eyes
Creating a crystal rivulet at her feet.
Airs of confusion blanketed his face
As she spoke softly into his ear,
“It was only a kiss.”
Five diminutive words
That trampled his reveries of her.
Author notes
CONTEST: It was only a kiss
I really hope you like it
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CONTEST: Make Me Sad
Eh? I really hope this isn't too much fluffy language. It's like, my only sad poem. If you don't understand some of the words, you could ask me
If you don't like it, I can just enter something else for this contest. Oh and this isnt erotic! Its sensual, I think.
A contest entry
- It was only a kiss by Welcome-To-Hell.
825 points, ended February 10, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Sad by hey charlie.
470 points, ended February 20, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From January 2008 by amaranthine lover.
2550 points, ended February 22, 2008, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PRE-WRITES! ROUNDS CONTEST!!! by Luminescence.
525 points, ended March 23, 2008, 176 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hit me with your best shot, c'mon, I can take it !!!
Comments
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beautiful imagery used here
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I understand it, don't worry. I just don't understand the need to jam that many large words into a poem. Sorry, just not my favorite style. Good write, and thanks for entering.
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Well, to you it may be a jam, but to me, they just fit. It could just be the significant age difference, as you're 14? and I am 18. I've been writing poetry forever, and I do a lot of crosswords
So maybe that's why those kind of words just sort of, flow for me.
Oh and in no way am I trying to downplay your intelligence, just making an observation. Would you mind if I removed this entry and submitted another?
Erika
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AWESOME!! Wish I could do poetry like you. This stuff blows my mind, and when it's hot like this... Umm Err Just super HOT! Hope you have more of this I really like sexy and erotica. "Celestially defined by sable curves. Smoldering ardor radiated" my fav. parts! Thanks for sharing this. Hope I can learn this style one day.
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Its not something you learn Tommy, it's something you feel.
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Well this is an excellently writter piece full of alot of vivid imagery and metaphor best of luck in the contest
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Thanks. Im so glad you liked it
Erika
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This is great I hope that they like it also as you have done a fine job with it goodluck in the contest much love always
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Thank you very much! I hope I win
Erika
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