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option 3

feeling all alone
standing in the corner
rejected by all
their only means is to mock
they will never accept me
im not good enough
i'll live this life alone
never to be in a group
always to be lonely
they never wnated me
im locked away where noone else can see
they dont want me known to the world
im all alone
forever

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  • Leaving Today
    January 28, 2008
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    they never "wnated" me, typo.
    "im" locked away where "noone" else can see, again typo.

    please corrct that, give a title to your poem and put the option number in your author note. otherwise a good poem Liked it. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering.

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    Sweet Silent Talker