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Silly us

It was only a kiss
Or so we said
Just the balmy night air
I was lonely
I was horny
Or so we said
Silly us
We'll never do that again

So we laughed our way
Out of an akward situation
But when the night is still
And the air lies hot on the sheets
And sleep isn't quite what I want
I wonder...

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 13, 2008

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    Nice write for your original prompt. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • unavailable
    September 10, 2008
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    I was lonely
    I was horny….
    How sweet that was reading.
    I enjoyed this poem very much.


  • My Precious
    February 9, 2008
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    This is so real. Congrats on some excellent work!


  • Welcome-To-Hell
    January 27, 2008

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    I like this its to the point and makes you think was it just that one time or did we not realise what we had until to late excellent write best of luck in the contest

  • Aisades
    January 27, 2008
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    ooooh nice

    This was a hot write. Very sensual and alluring. Good luck.

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